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In the shadows is where my heart used to dwell.
But these chains have been released from my wrists.
I can finally feel again, there's no longer any sorrow inside.
I can finally fly, I can see and heal, I'm free.
So tell me, what secrets do you keep locked deep inside?
I want to help you, hold you, I want you and me now.
Your presence set me free, I want to do the same for you.
I'll be your epitome of perfection, just give me a chance.
I love your mysterious ways and I'm craving this again.
I'm craving your touch, your presence, your warmth around me.
I can't explain it, this is what you do to me, deal with it.
Your chaotic beauty gets to me, but you disagree and call me crazy.
Maybe you're right, sometimes I  think it's crazy to feel this way about you.
Well I can be the one to hold you tight but release you when you ask to be free like me.
I just don't want to drag this on if there's really no chance.
I've fallen for you, but sometimes the one you fall for isn't ready to catch you.
Well with every piece of my dying broken heart, I hope you will catch me.
Because I'll always be waiting here with open arms, waiting for you to fall.
©2005-2010 ~violence-22
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written for a special person.
image :: drawn by me.
reference image :: stock.xchng

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wow caitlin that thats im speechless!

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we were put here on this planet for someone's amusment
:iconroythetoxicboy:
very cool and very deep, and the poem compliments the picture sooooo well! fav+ :horns:

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"Get out of my bin"
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I am at a loss for words. First, I clicked on this deviation because of the picture, but I stayed because I actually felt like reading something for once (seriously, I have no faves that are poetry or prose). When I read this, I thought back to how I feel about my ex girlfriend. She broke up with me over a month ago, and I'm still falling for her... She's just not going to catch me.

"I'm going to splatter my head against the marble floor, and slip into a state where my only friends are earthworms in the 6 feet of dirt above me." - taken from a story I wrote.... It's not posted yet.

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"Imagine a city where graffiti wasn't illegal, a city where everybody could draw wherever they liked. Where every street was awash with a million colours and little phrases..."
Banksy
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wow....awesome work...i know i read it before anyone on here...lol...its great i love ur work!

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"Why tiptoe through life only to arrive safely at death?"

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hehe aww, well i'm glad ya like it becky. thanks hun :hug:

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visit my twin: ~easy-target
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:iconviolence-22:
thanks so much dude! i really appreciate it :D thanks for the fav too!

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visit my twin: ~easy-target
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:iconviolence-22:
awww! :D well i'm so glad you like it. it means a lot to me.
i really love the picture too.
im sorry to hear about you and your ex girlfriend.
i know how you feel.. still falling for people that jsut aren't ready to catch you.
well i'ma lways here if ya need someone to talk to!
just give me a shout! :heart:
thanks again :)

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visit my twin: ~easy-target
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haha well thanks amber! glad ya like it :D
i usually always show you or beth or my sister my poems before i put them up on here.
thanks for the fav hunni :heart:

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visit my twin: ~easy-target
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That's amazing hun^_^ It truly is. I couldn't have put it better myself, nor could anyone else:):hug:

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I am not what I seem:blackrose:

The ones I love are the ones who are the least normal and are closer to being the most abnormal:heart:

Photo account:~QueenOfTheGypsies:rose:
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whoa...that's really good.. tis sweet.
definatly a fav ^_^

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You don't have to force a smile for anyone anymore.


Just smile for yourself.

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